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18-01-08, 18:24

Kritik....

Bagian editorialnya kurang. masih banyak kata2 yg tdk sesuai ama case-nya. contohnya
- vga, harusnya VGA.
- nama manufacturer, misalnya optimus, harusnya Optimus.

lalu, agar lebih terlihat exklusif harusnya kata2 berbau english, bisa dibikin miring (Italic)

kayak gini : [Review] Neverwinter Nights 2: Mask of the Betrayer

kekurangan di bagian isi, sangat bisa dimaklumi (karna baru Alpha). tapi tidak dibagian editorial
   
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